however, once in a while i will come across a blog where the author uses introspective, profound, 10 letter words, and her sentences are three lines long and theres semicolons and shit.. and thats FINE. but sometimes.. just sometimes.. it gets kinda irritating. like i have to read the sentence over again to understand it when it coulda just took 3 words and been straight to the point.
i was conversing (p.s. i loathe the word "conversate") with my hayati Abi about it this morning
--"yes and almost all of the time it would sound and flow so much better if she
just said 'it was awesome,' or 'it was amazing' instead of 'my head spills into
an infinity of ultimate horizons beckoning my ear to pitter patter amongst the
enlightening universe'... SHUT THE FUCK UP BITCH it was dope. nuff
said!"
do u like your truth to be raw and real, or eloquently construed? i like it both ways, but sometimes its just doin too much [hereafter referred to as DTM]. are we the only one who feels like this? tell me blog readers!
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i don't think i write like that, but if i ever do i'm counting on you as a friend to bitch me out about that! lol
"my head spills into
an infinity of ultimate horizons beckoning my ear to pitter patter amongst the enlightening universe"
Rach, help! I really don't know what that means! Is that poetry? Is it a novel? I don't know....I'm confused. You're right...burn that damn thesaurus!
if i EVER write like this. please send me an IM saying "shut the fuck up jess."
""i'm an artist, and i'm sensitive about my shit"."
amen!
I write as if I am talking to a best friend too...nothing to hide and its raw..
i write informal nd raw
and sometimes ike im talking
not even to my bestfriend
but like to myself sometimes
sometimes it makes sense nd other times it doesnt lol
but i nvr do too much
lmao . but
it depends if im in a poetic mood
but thats poetry
never i my blog
my blog i so improper
and i dnt think i have defined sentences lol
but i cn write very well and formal when i need to .
i like people who write both ways
i like picking up different styles.
Can I just say that I love reading what you have to say. Hilarious! You say what I think when I read other people's blogs. I try and write like Im talking to my friends and I love how you do to. Great Post
rachel! :) haha you are hilarious.. i LOVED your other post about the feet and the small shoes.. haha.. anyway, its great! oh and let's set a play date :) or in other words: i would be thrilled if the two of our son's could meet for the very first time and be introduced and get to know and play with each other and we can smile in awe of how cute they are and gawk on how we should do this more often. ;) haha xoxo.
like i said. grease face. thinks she's hella smart with her big words.
F YOU Bitch. I got use extensive vocabulary in my vernacular.
haha.
Hahahahaha* Well agreed.
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